How many times have you picked up a book and it felt like the writer was trying to fill you in on all the launching steps for a shuttle?
A lot of people think they need to state a lot of information right off the bat to start their books.
"Sarah lived in the ghetto of San Antonio for six years before moving to Florida. She didn't like dogs or cats and hated eating meat. Her favorite game was..."
That's exagerating, of course, but you get the picture. We think readers HAVE to know all this stuff about our characters, but a lot of the time that information clogs up the story and doesn't move anything.
If your characters are deep enough, people will get to know them without you having to speak directly to them and explain everything. Sometimes, you will but the generally not in the beginning.
As a side note, I drove a manual car for the first time since I was rear-ended. I kept stalling the thing, and my dad and I were both getting frustrated. I finally got moving, and then my dad realized I had been in third gear! That's the gear you use when you're going near thiry-miles-an-hour.
Monday, September 29, 2008
Is that REALLY necessary?
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7 comments:
Dude, third gear???
Sounds like fun...
I don't have this problem...I have the problem of not giving my characters enough to go on...I'm pretty bad it.
-Judi
I haven't tried standard yet...probably will soon.
I'm kind of guilty of that in my book. I need to fix it up. but yeah, I really hate when other authors do that...
:)Ian(:
I have that problem sometimes when I write. I need to write some short stories this week. I've got some great ideas (well, at least I think so! lol! :)
I usually go the opposite way. If anything, I don't give my readers enough- I get so caught up in the mind and POV of my character that I find that he or she doesn't usually think or talk about the kinds of things the reader needs to know. I do it with description too.
-Catey
Driving? Arrgh! I don't wanna drive...!
Fun till you get whip-lash. :)
Isn't that funny? Most of us will say someone is doing something wrong, and then you see the same problems in your own stuff! Maybe I'm the only one that happens to, Ian.
Are you going to post them on your blog, Paris? I used to write a short story every week...till I tried one that had the potential for a book.
I've struggled with that, Catey. What I like doing is to have a scene with people talking about the character. It can fill in some many cracks!
Don't want to drive? Man, Araken, you turn 17 and all of a sudden you'd kill for that little slip of paper!
Yeah, if I ever get around to writing them!
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