My critique arrived from the Guild! I scanned the first comments and the words like, "the story certainly holds the reader. It has the kind of action that could be portrayed well in a film and the author will want to hold onto movie rights."
It went downhill from there. The person (they don't give any names of and don't know mine) said there're several confusing places. Just detail stuff and plot confusion on my part. I'll work it out, develop less complicated plots, and add less confusing details.
If my short stories confuse any of y'all at any part, just red-flag me with a comment. Showing me this stuff is invaluable to me as a writer, and I won't be offended.
In addition to my critique, my package from the History Channel arrived tonight! About 6 hours and 20 minutes of ancient battles, and 1 hour and 30 minutes on the Dark Ages. Alright!
OK....maybe I'm the only one gets excited about that stuff.
Tuesday, January 22, 2008
It's Here!
Posted by Jamin at 8:16 PM
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2 comments:
thats great you got your story back. I hope it turns out well. what's it about exactly???
It's about a fallen dynasty and its two heirs (twins who don't who they are)who struggle against sinister plots to kidnapp them.
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